Wikipedia:Article assessment/Extinct mammals/Neanderthal
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Assessment  |
| Extinct mammals |
| Assessment completed 27 February 2006 – 5 March 2006 |
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| Aurochs Australopithecus |
Assessment of an article under the topic Extinct mammals.
Article: Neanderthal
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[edit] Review by violet/riga
- Coverage and factuality: 6
- Poor referencing and does not seem to cover everything (such as theories about their extinction)
- Writing style: 8
- Generally well written
- Structure: 7
- Could do with reordering and resectioning
- Aesthetics: 7
- The "popular culture" section is too large and does not add to the article particularly well; the images are good
- Overall: 6
A disappointing article - I would have thought it would be of a higher standard given its encyclopedic importance. violet/riga (t) 20:10, 1 March 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Review by HereToHelp
- Coverage and factuality:
5. It all looks okay (but I am not an anthropologist), but there are very few references, and there are not inlined.
- Writing style:
8. Flows well, but there are few awkward places and some arid technical terms.
- Structure:
9.5. Flows pretty well, but it could always improve.
- Aesthetics:
7 Nice images, but you'd expect more for a topic like this (link to Commons template?).
- Overall:
7. Mostly because of the (lack of) references, and there are plenty.
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