Wikipedia:Article assessment/Extinct mammals/Mammoth
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Assessment  |
| Extinct mammals |
| Assessment completed 27 February 2006 – 5 March 2006 |
| Assessments |
| Aurochs Australopithecus |
Assessment of an article under the topic Extinct mammals.
Article: Mammoth
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[edit] Review by violet/riga
- Coverage and factuality: 7
- Poor referencing; does not go into detail about its position in the food chain, but seems to cover most other things
- Writing style: 8
- Some informal language
- Structure: 7
- The lead is too short and needs to summarise the article; the sections need rearranging to group things together, using more levels
- Aesthetics: 7
- Could do with one or two more images
- Overall: 7
Needs some rearranging, but is generally fairly good. violet/riga (t) 20:55, 27 February 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Review by HereToHelp
- Coverage and factuality: 5
- References are not inlined; general references are non-existant.
- Writing style: 8
- Could use some disambiging of a few technical terms, but otherwise pretty good.
- Structure: 8
- Couldn't find many problems but it didn't jump out at me as fantastic either. Headers could use a little tweaking.
- Aesthetics: 8
- Standard taxobox. Two images seem a bit on the skimpy side making the article seem a little arid with text.
- Overall: 6.5
Seems mediocre except for the references, which bring this down a lot.--HereToHelp (talk • contribs) 13:57, 4 March 2006 (UTC)
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