Talk:Youth Offending Team
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Reasons for assessment: Length, clarity, and photos are great. Issues that should be addressed before nominating it for GA status:
- a lot of the bullets should be done away with and restructured in prose form.
- more references/citations could probably be found besides the official YOT websit to minimize any chances or perceptions of POV problems
- external links should link somewhere and be separated from references
- some minor technical errors in writing - needs to be copyedited
- disclaimer at the bottom seems excessive, since the content of the article is not suggesting a remedy to a legal/criminal justice problem
- possibly the article could be shortened to be more concise, but only if that can be done without sacrificing comprehensiveness, which IMO is one of the strengths of the article.
- could use some more wikification
Bobanny 22:04, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
I've wikified, added external links and some more references and see also's, and changed technical writing errors where I have found them, and removed many of the bullet pointed areas and changed them to prose--SGGH 12:03, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
