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[edit] Biased, redundant text
. "...in spite of her litigious past history."
"past history" is redundant and incorrect; history is by nature in the past, or "passed" as it should be. Additionally, to say that Ono's history is litigious is an opinion. Perhaps replace it with a phrase the points out specifically that in the past, she has brought litigation against individuals who she alleged slandered or libeled her husband's legacy.
