Template talk:Intro length
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This template uses improper grammar. Either it needs to be "...according to the guidelines at Wikipedia:Guide to layout by moving some material from the introduction into...", or you could reorder it and say "Please help Wikipedia by moving some material from the introduction into the body of the article according to the guidelines at Wikipedia:Guide to layout, moving some material from the introduction into the body of the article." Personally, I'd rewrite it as "Please help improve the introduction by moving some material from it into the body of the article according to the guidelines at Wikipedia:Guide to layout." Dr. Sunglasses 04:27, 12 July 2006 (UTC)