Talk:Firestop pillow
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I removed some excessive hyperlinks as well as the clean-up text box, which was based on the excessive linking, I believe.--Achim 01:54, 5 May 2006 (UTC)
The NPOV comment is highly subjective. As the author of the original article, I can offer proof that I do not stand to gain from the sale of the product described, nor from the sale of anything that competes against it. These products are available from at least a dozen sources in the US alone, and many more worldwide. The generic lessons, however, do not change. I have no stake in it either way and would welcome a debate on merit from someone who actually knows the subject matter. I invite the party who made the comment, Fsiler, to indicate where the facts I stated are wrong. If you have opinions about this, I would like to hear whether or not you have designed, manufactured, fire-tested or installed any firestop pillows to base your opinion on.--Achim 22:28, 20 April 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Use of language
I'm not sure tha language in this article is appropriate - use of words suchs as 'nifty' in an encyclopedia article ? I think it requires a clean-up.
ahpook 17:29, 25 September 2006 (UTC)
