Talk:Drayton Manor Theme Park
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[edit] Slogans and Quotes
Hello, isn't providing us with "the slogans and Quotes that Drayton Manor are using to advertise the park this season" the same thing as reproducing the park's advertising? I think that these should be removed. Politepunk 22:38, 11 March 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Lifeboat
I couldn't find a press release from either Drayton Manor or RNLI about the funding of the lifeboat by Stormforce 10, I'm sure there must be one and it would be nice to add it as a reference, the nearest I could find was this HM The Queen to view new RNLI lifeboat at St James’s Palace that mentions the boat and seems to suggest that it's an Atlantic 85 which replaces an Atlantic 75, so I've altered this article to reflect that. --ericthefish 18:34, 24 March 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Advert / NPOV
I've tried to reword the article to make it more neutral and less like an advert, I think the {{advert}} tag could be removed now, I'd like to hear what somebody else thinks first though. --ericthefish 16:46, 25 March 2006 (UTC)
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- I think you've done a pretty good job. It was me who added the advert template so... it's gone. Well done for your edits on this article. Politepunk 22:17, 25 March 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Future Projects & Rumours
Unsubstantiated rumours don't really belong on wikipedia (See Verifiability), we need to find reliable sources for each of the predictions we've got in the future projects & rumours section, once referenced I think the section should be renamed 'Future projects'. --ericthefish 16:52, 19 April 2006 (UTC)
[edit] SkyFlyer Accident
Removed the phrase "apparently due to a fatal accident" from the Pandemonium section, because as User:81.129.61.56 pointed out theres "no information about this incident on the internet". If anyone wants to put it back, please do so citing your sources. --ericthefish 20:03, 26 April 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Zoo?
Why is there no mention of the zoo area within the park? I don't actually know much about it, but was just wondering if it could be included
