Talk:Business Professionals of America
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This article was nominated for deletion on 2006 September 17. The result of the discussion was Keep, contingent on rewrite. |
[edit] NPOV
Is it just me, or is this article highly un-NPOV? --Zarel 03:27, 14 February 2006 (UTC)
I agree Rapidflash 05:06, 16 April 2006 (UTC)
Okay, I tried fixing the article to be more neutral by stating that the quote comes from the organization itself. Additionally, I have included a link, so if anyone wants to visit the site and get some information. Aoeu 00:27, 19 April 2006 (UTC)
I could probably write up a nice summary of the club, including the events that competitors participate in. I'll do it when I have the time. Rapidflash 01:52, 4 May 2006 (UTC)
I just removed the following - it is un-NPOV, plus it refers to itself in first person (Wikipedia is not BPA) - if anyone can NPOV-ize it, do so
- Business: The field for which BPA prepares students; emphasizes that they educate their members to work efficiently, not only in an office setting, but also in a wide variety of business situations.
- Professionals: Students indicate they join BPA to take advantage of a wide variety of professional development opportunities.
- of America: Symbolizes pride for the country and its free enterprise business system.
There are other non-NPOV parts, too, but I don't know what to do about it. The whole thing just reads like an advertisement. I've joined BPA once, and didn't really like it. --Zarel 18:31, 7 May 2006 (UTC)
