User talk:Un sogno modesto

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1 Your question about a tree in california
2 Chicago
3 Chicago FAC
4 Chicago
5 AID
6 You helped choose Cactus as this week's WP:AID winner
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[edit] Your question about a tree in california

Would the tree of your question happen to be a Birch? AdamBiswanger1 16:52, 25 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Chicago

Could you please tell me why you reverted my edit to Chicago? --° 22:03, 11 August 2006 (UTC)

6 days and no answer, I readd the edit. --° 14:54, 17 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Chicago FAC

After a three week absence, I finally managed to take a look at the article. At the moment, I don't know if it is ready for FAC since there has been some major changes (the utilities section has shrunk drastically, leading me to question why the section currently exists). Prose is almost the same as the last time I checked it. Right now, I think prose is the major sticking point, and I would truly appreciate others' having a look at it. Once that is settled, then the article is ready for FAC (and hopefully will pass). Pentawing^Talk 00:55, 13 August 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Chicago

A few comments on the Chicago article:

Demographics section is just a list of statistics and fairly unreadable. The graph there is pretty illegible too. I would rather you focus on only key statistics and more commentary on what those numbers mean, and spin the rest off.
Lots of other lists and recitation of statistics throughout the article without commentary that can just be revamped entirely - education, infrastructure, sports, media
History - The period of Chicago's rapid growth in the late 19th century seems kind of brief. Only a one line mention of the fire?
No section in the article gave me much of a sense of the layout of the city...what's it like in the north side? what's it like in the south side...etc.
Blues and jazz mentions are really brief.
No mention of Frank Lloyd Wright? Granted he did a lot of his work outside of the city, but he was an influential presence in Chicago.
too much detail on crime.

Maybe more comments later...

--DaveOinSF 18:36, 5 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] AID

[edit] You helped choose Cactus as this week's WP:AID winner

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[edit] You helped choose Environmentalism as this week's WP:AID winner

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